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Did you mean it baby when

 You said,

You “Love Me”?

On your knees

And I stood bedewed

Sturdy with “NO”


Ooh if you really meant it baby

How you didn’t espy?

Things I couldn’t whisper

But did confess

My eyes


Walked off Disheartened

And bereaved

I yelled to construe but

Petty you perceived.


Ego ensconced everything,

Once we shared

Culminate our relationship

Silence and despair


 Love, care, joy, happiness

Life was all fun

Now all I behold baby

Is a pandemonium


I ain’t complaining honey

  As    “I”  know,

    It’s the asinine “ME”

  Still sodden with

 Tender of your


  That once “YOU” bestowed.


Yuppieeeeeeeee i was successful in giving a try :mrgreen:

hmm dono how it came out, but finally i made my first attempt :mrgreen: .

A post from my freaky world of dreams 😀 .



Categories: Poetic Bug
  1. Shanky
    March 14, 2010 at 1:19 pm

    Hats off dear..
    Love this one..

    • March 14, 2010 at 3:10 pm

      hie thnks a lottttttt shanky 🙂
      n i knew u will like it cz u understood this 😉 :mrgreen:

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