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Self Betrayal

Well i don’t even remember when i started this poem. Today while cleaning my folder found it lying somewhere incomplete. Hmm and finally i completed it today 😀 .

Walked once, Hand in hand

Stand today, estranged

Understood once, the reticent thoughts

Today misconstrue, even a simple talk

Enraged over the dying ties,

Decided to bid Good Bye

Erased the memories, inurn the feel

Burnt the images, framed within

Thinking it would, set me free

From the shackles, of “history”


Hearing suddenly, the familiar voice

I turned and saw the extant ashes

Shaping up into, beautiful images

Well aware, shattered I will be

Stifle the desires, to self I plea

And again,

Self betrayal is what I gained!!!

Categories: Poetic Bug
  1. Sree
    June 20, 2010 at 10:03 am

    Nice one…very deep! 🙂
    But i’ve a problem…cannot related to poetry unless it rhymes…nothing to do with this poem or the way you have written it…its lovely, par main aisa hi hooon 😛
    Keep writing! 😀

    • June 20, 2010 at 2:57 pm

      Lol samjh me nai aaya still nice 😛
      hiihihhihi bin samjhee hi its lovely bhi 😛
      Too much 😀
      n its rhyming yar but my way not the usual way of rhyming,,,that way i dono to rhyme itself 😀

      Thanksss a lottt buddyy 🙂

  2. July 5, 2010 at 10:40 pm

    You ended it well.

    The name of your blog should have been, death by smileys.

    • July 6, 2010 at 2:57 pm

      Thanksss a lott 😀
      And btw why death by smileys?? 😛

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